Briaic Daydream

I someday hope to learn to dance well enough to make this a reality

I danced with latin flares

And placid glares

that only cared for your lips

My body twists and turns

As desire burns

As I reach out and kiss your wrist

Lights go out

And you step in

My girl, my dear

Where have you been?

A dream for dreamers

Fantasy of men

My soul is yearning 

let's dance again!

Your eyes of fire

My hearts desire

is to slake your every thirst

Your breath is heavy 

As I hold you steady

We come together then disperse

You smile at me

So mischievously 

I pull you close and hold you tight

My love, my dear

Forget every fear

There shall be no end to this night 

Author's Note

This piece goes out to my girlfriend. I love her so much :P

Reviews

[paparapapa]

Aww. This is really sweet. Both of you are really lucky. Great write. I enjoyed reading it. ;)

[Faiza Iqbal]

This is so lovely! Good to see that you guys love each other so dearly :P I wish you both all the luck in your relationship!
A great poem by the way :)

[Amila Jay]

Very, Very nice:)

[Leon R]

Very beautiful. You manage to express your feelings in awesome way.

[Kriston]

I swear man as my bro wows this is sweet

[Mary Fioratti]

What a beautiful and sincere poem. So beautifully written.
You describe with so much feeling.
I hope you and your girlfriend be together forever.
*Mary*

[DreyaArt]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee that is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful, you must have a beautiful girlfriend, and she must love you something amazin :) cheers to you both and I wish you all happiness :)

[Bridget Murphy]

So beautiful, your girlfriend is lucky!!!:)

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

this is so sweet...i really like the poem and she seems like a really lucky girl

[*~* ReAdInG Mu5iC *~*]

Awww, so sweet! I like this one!