Briaic Daydream

I someday hope to learn to dance well enough to make this a reality

I danced with latin flares

And placid glares

that only cared for your lips

My body twists and turns

As desire burns

As I reach out and kiss your wrist

Lights go out

And you step in

My girl, my dear

Where have you been?

A dream for dreamers

Fantasy of men

My soul is yearning 

let's dance again!

Your eyes of fire

My hearts desire

is to slake your every thirst

Your breath is heavy 

As I hold you steady

We come together then disperse

You smile at me

So mischievously 

I pull you close and hold you tight

My love, my dear

Forget every fear

There shall be no end to this night 

Author's Note

This piece goes out to my girlfriend. I love her so much :P

Reviews

[stars are far]

oh..this was very sweet :)

[LilyLily]

Very romantic, I like it. Especially the ending.

[Priscilla Sayers]

The love seeps through this poem elegantly. A romantic dance where lovers ignite as they are lost in the music and in eachothers movements. Beautifully written.

[tk]

wow. this is really an amazing piece! emotion, passion and desire is delicately and exquisitely expressed in this poem. you truly penned this wonderfully!! ^_^

[Manpreet]

Lovely poem. I loved it!!

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Lovely romantic poem!

[emma]

very beautiful.

[Sarah]

lovely...

[Break The Broken]

Great word choice! it had a lovly flow. the best part for me was:
Lights go out
And you step in
My girl, my dear
Where have you been?
A dream for dreamers
Fantasy of men
My soul is yearning
let's dance again!

but over all it was amazing, great write! c;

[TawnyBlueStar]

hi,
wow, you must have an amazing relationship with your girlfriend :) your love for her really shows through this poem :)
beautiful poem :D