Tears in the Rain

Writen the end of 2010. I was having a bad day and went for a walk.

Tears are coming
Rain will soon be starting
Walking along with Rain
Running with Tears
they mingle together on rosey cheeks
 
Look up at the grey sullen clouds
Realize you're not alone
People everywhere cry
Abuse they receive
Disappointment they bear
Heart break they go through
 
Tears mixed with theirs
Finding the world isn't apart
Conbined with Tears and Rain
 
The Tears have fallen to the ground
The Rain has washed away
Leaving rosey cheek and cloudless day

Reviews

[Sujash I. Purna]

my eyes got stuck at the title. Isn't there a song called Tears and Rain by James Blunt? "Someone's plagiarising here" I thought. But no! This is a unique work. Very charming. Here's a bit narcissism in the line : "they mingle together on rosey cheeks"
Otherwise, everything is perfect. Very emotive! Loved reading it :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

The imagery expressed here is top rated :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. Most of us will have bad days. A walk in the rain can make you feel less sad and less lonely. I like how you ended the poem. Sometime hope can come after the rain. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kyle]

Well done. I appreciate your avoidance of using flowery, silly language in your writes. You are a good writer.