Tempest

My life was like a hurricane

Blowing me around it seemed

I never knew up from down

Thinking I was on my own

Then from the dark you came

Like a searchlight meant just for me

Thought I'd be lost for good

Then suddenly there you stood 

Saving me

Pulling me

Into the light I never knew

Waking me

Breathing life

Into my dark and lonely soul 

Reviews

[JC]

has a lovely romantic fantasy feel to it, nice flow and ease...great job.

[Lizardo]

This poem is so deep, it is lovely to read but also makes you imagine what's going on
''Thinking I was on my own''
It's true, most of us think that we are on our own
Incredible poem!

[Sarah Carswell]

Thank you, it's nice to know my writing is even a little bit thought provoking.

[Lizardo]

You are welcome