Guidance

To the end of the world in search of you.

As you guided me back to the beginning is when i knew.

the journey to lose myself, to find my truth

this dying contributed to my growth.

To lose everything , to learn my worth

There is no place that id rather be

than right here where u put me

Guided by your love 

a taste of your sweetness is more than enough

to  surrender my everything.

willingly giving it all away

so nothing can get in our way

As we dance through the moments

Free from time, Free from the mind

Can this be love, the way that i feel

Reviews

[Jack Cassidy]

I like the imagery of the two lines, "As we dance through the moments" and "Free from time, free from the mind." To me, it expresses a need for letting go of control and allowing ourselves to be deeply connected within the natural order of life. Good poem.

[SARAHD]

Thank you for your response. i am learning to surrender, sometimes my mind gets in the way and makes it hard but i trust that the natural order will guide me :) Have a great day.