End Of My Life

End Of My Life

A Poem by Saravanan Evu

The Innocent Suicide Of An Isolated Man

Shining Sun and Shining Stars 
were fading away;
Because I'm going far away 
where no one can't see me 
how I'm.

Story of my life was blued.
I'm crying again while 
thinking of those days again.

Tears fell from my eyes 
when I fall in my mom's eyes.
Then she wiped my tears 
with a smile on her face.

When smile blooms on my face
Her smile vanished in her face.

I cried again and waited for 
My mom to wipe my tear again.

But she went away from me 
like a  passing cloud.
I realized, I've lost the heaven
of my life.

Finally they threw me out of
their life.

I lived alone in this cruel world.

The days have passed quickly.

But still,
I'm in the same condition.
Losing all my sensation.

Sorrow of my life evolves tomb
for my life.

So, How I could be brave 
when all the white flowers
were fallen into red river.

My heart is crying like a child
for the piece of happiness.
Which, I never seen in my life.

And, How I could live forever.
When I realized,
The tears of my unhappiness 
were last long to be forever.

I'm crying again
In the sorrow of pain.
And, I couldn't handle it anymore.

So, I'm going far away 
where no one can't see me 
how I'm.

Oh, My dear heart you, don't worry 
I will take you  with me when 
I go away.

My mom will be there for us 
to wipe the wounds which people
gave to us.

Saying my final goodbye to this 
Cruel world.
Cause I'm going away to see my
Mom again.

- FIN -

© 2015 Saravanan Evu

Author's Note

Saravanan Evu
Sorry for the Grammer Errors...

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So emotively layered...I felt this, powerful piece :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Nice meaning!!
Well done!!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Beautiful, touching piece. I could feel the raw emotion just simmering underneath the surface. I commend you for the striking impact you left on the readers of this piece. Some grammatical errors are just a footnote, they can easily be fixed. Overall, good job with this nice piece!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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I'm afraid for the day that I won't get to pick up the phone and cry to my mother about my bad days. While this poem reminded me of my fear, it's also a beautiful reminder that we very well may see our loved ones again. I really like that this poem is cyclical. It flows really well, despite a few spelling and grammar errors. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

So sad, so brutal, and so honest. You really captured the feeling of hopelessness that comes with the loss of a loved one. I'll just refer you to the review below. I completely agree with them. Thank you for sharing this with all of us!

Posted 8 Years Ago

that was saddening. Grammatical errors though. Mother's worth is cant be replaced. tru. Thanks for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago

Mother's love has no equals. An intense and heartwrenching write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Raw and powerful......like all downfall moments.....a stunning write !

Posted 8 Years Ago

Fantastic write! Much emotions running wild and well written!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on March 12, 2015
Last Updated on March 17, 2015


Saravanan Evu
Saravanan Evu

Chennai, India

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