My redemption

My redemption

A Poem by Saurin Corvinus
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To a girl who changed my life, but its better to have loved and loss then to have never have love at all.

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Ashes to fate
From dusk to dawn
My heart once beat
But now its done

Once you saved me
I could finally see
Once dark now light
I don’t have to fight

I’ve  seen things bad
But you’ve seen worse
Your tears makes me sad
My luck is your curse

Though I love you
You inspire me
Everyday to try
And quit the fight

 

© 2009 Saurin Corvinus


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Great writing, you are very talented. Keep up the good work. I'll be reading more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL!!! I love it!!! great inspiring poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Saurin Corvinus
Saurin Corvinus

Susanville, CA



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I'm a 18 year old ready for the world ahead of me. I mainly write poems and songs but I'll delve into a story every once in a while. I am a Martial artist, and I just started parkour. As you ca.. more..

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