J.N.P.

Love poem for my love.

I'm bad at poetry, prepare for the worst.
Jason, you have clenched my thirst.
I wanted love more than anything
And you have shown me what that means.
You are my life, my heart, my soul,
Those past relationships paid a toll
What I needed to get through
To get, to find, to fall for you
A future without you seems utterly bleak
So tell me baby where you'll be
I'll follow you whereever you go
As long as I'm wanted, let me know
You're life. You're love. You're everything
You bring the good news right to me.
I'll be there, baby, night and day
If you need help I'll find a way.
Thank you for everything you've done.
Thank you for saying I'm the one.
You have given me your whole heart,
I don't know how to repay you but here's a start,
I give you my love, all that I have,
I hope it's enough for you to be glad.

 

I love you, period, plain and simple.
I'll be there for you through fall and winter.
Spring, summer, it's all the same
With you by my side it's all fair game
We can do whatever we want or need
So accept this token of my love for thee.

 

(I give you my heart...I give you my soul.
But wait, you have them. They're already yours.)

Author's Note

I wrote this in about 10 minutes, still, tell me what you think. It's heartfelt.

Reviews

[Jason]

Very very powerful baby. I love it and i do accept your token. I really have nothing more to say but i love you. And for your first poem its not bad its really quite good. It flows well and rhymes. You have chosen your words with emotion and i can feel that. :)