I Hate This

Love is a mystery.

 

I don’t understand this life,

To gain, to lose, to strife

This life that I live is a mystery

I don’t get how you can just write a horror

book and go down in history

There are so many things I wish I could have

I wish the stars were aligned just right

So, that our name would be embedded in them

 And shine so bright

I wish you and I could be together

Instead of you and her

I want that life changing first kiss

The experience, the feeling of having your hands in mine

But, as I’ve learned, no one dies a virgin

Because life f***s you in the beginning,

middle, and end

I just wish that I didn’t have to call you ‘friend’.

 

 

 

Author's Note

I feel like utter crap right now. This is how I'm feeling. I know, I know, it doesn't rhyme in some parts. But I liked how it turned out. So, please don't comment about that.

Reviews

[Bridget Mcmaken]

wow.... I'm sorry that you feel like this.... but um out of all this is a good poem. I can feel the tears filling my eyes. This is great work. But I understand how you feel. Awesome work.... and so sorry that you feel this way.

[Andrew Wright]

Wow... I seriously had to fight tears reading this. For once, I don't really have anything to say...

[Alex Thomas]

Simple and intricate at the same time. A small secret: No one understands life. Very emotional poem.

[Cassiopia Summers]

I can honestly say I understand and know exactly how you feel. I loe the simplicity of the poem, but it has depth to it. (: Great write Kristen. (: I love it girl, it's amazing. Haha, keep up the beautiful work that you seem to do. (:

[Anas]

okay i don't wanna sound like im overrating or anything but this is one of the most amazing things i've ever read. Maybe 'cause it describes my situation in some parts I don't know.. but the poin is I found it really nice and truthful.... :)