What I like about you

What I like about you

 

 

 

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His smile:

 

It makes my day.

 

 

His lips:

 

Such sweet candy display. I wonder what they taste like.

 

 

His hands:

 

A magical force all on its own. They work miracles.

 

 

His touch:

 

Leaves a tingling sensation, a burning trail of heat behind on my skin. Like a mark, its own personal imprint.

 

 

His gaze:

 

A sensual festivity. It penetrates my very core and leaves me breathless, gasping for air.

 

 

Him:

 

Simply…

 

…perfect…

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I know this ends a little bit too quickly so I MIGHT add some later on. At the moment, I just can't think of anything else. Tell me what you think. (:

Reviews

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Some poems should be short and sweet. When you force yourself to come up with more, the new thoughts will not naturally fuse with the previous writing that came to you so automatically. This had a feeling that needed to be short in order to hit so hard. Thanks for sharing.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a very beautifully written piece. I don't think you need to add on to it...it is perfect the way it is. I feel like you truly love this person. That's what I get from this poem anyway. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Jessica]

Oh, I've been here. This is so short and sweet, I love it. Don't make any alterations to it.

[Kelly Taylor]

I gotta agree with Shawn Renee; if you force the inspiration it's gonna disrupt the flow and not add much.
I liked it, even if it was short. It had a lot of emotion (something you excel at, definitely).

[Santana Angus]

soooo sweet i know that feeling it's one that i find so real.

[Cheyenne]

I like this it reminds me of a boy who doesnt even know i exist!! Hes the most adorable thing to ever cross my eyes and ive never spoken a word to him! Anywho good poem :)

[Sam Cambell]

That's sweet. I agree, I hope this is based off someone, and that there'll be more poems about that someone in the future. Cute write.

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Kristen,

I think it's a cute little write about someone who is important to you. I do hope that this is based off someone. I would like to cuddle up to this stud muffin if I could.

Regards,

Matthew

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem of love and thankfulness. I like the set-up and feel in the words. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[nono]

What i like about you...Reminds me of the song! lolz XD You did such a nice job writing this very descriptive I enjoyed reading it. And what a cute little tribute!