Forbidden Heat

Your hands remind me of the one thing that I must confess

As they roam over my back, legs, hips, and my chest

Your tongue massaging mine in my mouth drives me insane

Makes me want to cry out the Lord’s name in vein

Who knows how I’ll even begin to try to hide this hickie on my neck

What I do know, though, is that tonight I’ll be going home a wreck

With vigor, you rip my panties apart in the heat

And I run my tongue across your lips, it tastes so sweet

Pushing into me, you force me higher up against the wall

I cry out and push back and you descend backward and fall

Lamps are broken, clothes are ripped apart and strewn across the floor

You have me in a fit, biting into your shoulder, screaming for more

This can't be happening, I can't believe were doing this

Who knew doing wrong could be so much bliss

I'm hyperventilating now, surrendering to this sentiment of passion

We both cry out in ecstasy and come together in the filthiest of fashion

I smile, I doubt I'll ever forget this pretty picture

Despite the insults we'll get from other people, a painful sort of stricture.

 

 

Author's Note

Let me just say that someone told me that this was blatant and at first I was annoyed but I then I re-read it over and grasped the definition behind the word "Blatant". I didn't realize it was but now I do, and I did it on purpose. I'm not really into the whole idea of covering up things in my poems. It's just not my style. It annoys the hell out of me.

But anyways, tell me what you think.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

So this is the first of its kind you ever write..
i swear i almost knew this..for this was written to be like an erotica
this was written like being put in a position you never expected and things got out of hand ha ha
the going insane and the wild cry ,and the mess you will end up with while leaving
and what to tell those you will see..this was great,very exciting to read
i never read erotica,but this was so different..its a lovely story
how in life we could go crazy and wild..yes lets learn everything,ha ha
lovely write..

[Coyote Poetry]

A little more passion in the last line. When you are content in the dance of love and passion. You don't care about other folks opinions. I like the flow and the story. Few times in a life we are wild and crazy. You are correct. The pretty picture will always stay with you. A excellent pom.
Coyote

[dovetailer]

I must admit ...this I can relate to...you write so much about pain and betrayal and vexation...I cannot relate to a lot of that because our lives are so different...we are of different generations...raised in another time...another place...but love...lust...intimacy...getting laid...these are universal issues we can all enter into...(no pun intended)...
This was feral...visceral...raw...pure passion...up against a wall...letting us feel your unrefined side of your nature take over and you giving in to its screaming in your head...your bodies wanting...taking...without thought of yesterday or tomorrow...or an hour from now...pure power...
We've all been there...even if we don't admit it to our kids...lol
I felt like I was watching...
Excellent...

[Andrew Wright]

(O.o) well, well, well... how mentally stimulating.

[heich]

wow..very detailed..lol..ill try to write something like that someday..

[KL]

Intense, and doesn't omit anything in description. Maybe a little too blatant, but overall not too shabby.

[Kesha]

Such an amazing write! So delicately written! I really enjoyed this! :)

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Kristen,

Works wells...A very intense piece. Well done.

Regards,

Matthew

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Don't you dare touch the sinful exhale of ecstasy! I can fell every dip, curl, swirl, and scream and the reaction is good for my husband. Bravo, kristen.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

o.O....
this was very brave....
and you hide so little...
errr.......gosh, control yourself would ya?