Lost Love

I lay in the dark, gathering my thoughts

I think about all the pain you've brought

And I wonder if you even care anymore

Or if the thought of me's become a bore

How could I even begin to forget you?

Hard to believe but I have a heart, too.

 

You might say I'm overreacting

but I don't think I am

I'm only speaking what I feel

Knowing that you don't give a damn

 

Why did it have to end this way?

It was too good to be true

 

SUCH a surprise to think that you really

weren't different than all those before you.

 

Supposing now that "I love you" doesn't mean a thing...

Or maybe it simply means "I'll strangle you with a f*****g string..."

Author's Note

I don't exactly like the title, but anyways, tell me what you think.

Reviews

[al25]

Really like the last stanza. Anyway great job :)

[Jessica]

I can relate, very well actually. Great job, love the emotion.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

The last line was beautiful, along with the whole poem. I really felt the emotions

[FocusedAmnesia]

Absolutely love the last line. An amazing way to end the piece. This was a really good read.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. In the end most of us have the same questions as in this poem. We play the fool or the devil. A excellent poem. Thank you. A well written poem with a very good story.
Coyote

[Alex Thomas]

We've all felt that sense of heartbreaking loss. We all know how it feels to lose a person we thought we could trust. You do an excellent job with emotions as you usually do. The title is very clear cut. If you wanted a more ambiguous title you could try that, but the current one does work for the piece. A great job.

[Akshat♥]

The title is absolutely fine...
the person here needs his/her love to be real..
understanding,care is all one need..
this poem brings a good thought about true love..
nice poem:)