Visions.

Figments of my imagination,

Who says you can't be real?

Unicorns gallop across lush pastures,

Fairies rollick amongst the leaves.

 

Life in my world is grand,

See things through through my window,

Where color seeps into lifeless objects,

And beauty is never lacking.

 

The sun warms my chromatic skin,

Color dances throughout my flesh,

The emerald sea supports my body,

And blankets of citrine lie just beyond.

 

Climb the mighty wooden towers,

Verdure wax adorns the branches,

Breathtaking scenery meets your eyes,

The striking beauty humbles you so.

Inhale the crisp air,

It cleans your lungs of of their troubles.

This is how life was meant to be.
This is perfection, but can it last?

Reviews

[Emily Rose]

Nice use of imagery - it's clear and original. Sometimes it feels a little cluttered though, like you're jumping around too fast for me to comprehend. It reminds me of Beatles lyrics :-) (Take that for what you will - personally I'd say it's a compliment, but it depends how you feel about the Beatles.) The images you have us see are interesting, original and a little perplexing. It really goes to show how perfection for some is simply a confusing maze for others.

[Vanessa]

The bit about the unicorn made me smile.
Dear, oh dear, I'd better put this on my group!! Thanks so much for sharing and adding.
Honest, your entry is appreciated. I hesitate to stop you from adding some more, love!!
Thanks.
-Vanessa

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Enticing and beautiful in structure. A lovely picture of what Earth could be.

[Broken.]

Ah, what a nice place. ^_^

And you say you suck at writing TSSK!!

That was beautiful.

I knew you cuold alllllllll along. :D

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A beautiful write. Thank you for sharing. Debileah