Bears.

Please, don't look at me,

Turn away,
I can't bear your bright blue eyes,

Staring sweetly into mine.

These dull brown eyes,
They'll never compare,
To your crystal blue,
Your crystal blue.

Please don't smile,
That goofy smile that I love ever so,

With your messy teeth,

And your silly face.

 

This dull smile,

Will never compare,

To your goofy smile,

Your silly little smile.

Please, don't speak,

With your funny voice,

And you're silly jokes,

And that way you talk.

This annoying voice,

Will never compare,

To your funny laugh,

And your sweet chords.

But please!
Look into my eyes,
Smile at me,
Laugh and talk and joke.

 

I love every minute of it,
So I'll surrender to this feeling,
And let you steal my heart,

Even though I fear you wont break it.

Reviews

[Walkingblind]

Reading everyone elses reviews I have to agree it is cute. I've never
really read a cute poem before so feel happy yours is the best one.
On one hand it is kindof sad because it seems like the other person is
perfect, but I like this.

[Vanessa]

Awwww how sweet, Nina. I love it.
This could have been more of a downer, a sad sorta thing.. yearning and all.
But you completely turned it into something sweet, something that made it okay to yearn :D
Great job, Nina.

I still miss you!!

[Samantha Ellen]

awww :)
i'm kinda glad i told him for u now :D

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

I like the tongue in cheek, contrary kinda tease to this.... very good capture of the turmoil you have when you want but you don't want.... let's try this, let's see this..... if I let you in.... then will you be in or not..... just playful with a bit of anxiousness.... and a touch of hopeful..... good write.

Kath

[Broken.]

Jerid.


Would smile :)

[yma~catherine]

oh this is sweet! Simple and so true to life!