going on

going on

A Poem by Mason Vail
"

there are no discernible tracks ahead, but this train doesn't seem to be slowing down...

"

control is a myth

certainty, an illusion

yet we must go on

© 2009 Mason Vail


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Mason Vail
Today, life feels less like a train ride and more like skydiving...
...without a chute.

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Great poem. It certainly shows the uncertainty of life that we must face everyday. Without moving forward we will never fulfill our purpose or meet the people that we are destined to befriend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I've been around the sun a few times myself, and yet only recently have I felt the full weight of this truth.

Excellently said.
I love when such thoughts are so masterfully stated without an excess of flourishes.
Thanks for posting.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A Poem by Mason Vail