I'll Never Let You Go

I'll Never Let You Go

A Poem by w
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Punk duet love song

"
ore day dreamin', 
its all about you
holdin' me
the whole day through
there we are,
side by side
you. and. I.

              stop dreamin',
                 here I am, hello
                 holdin' on,
                 never lettin'; go
                 here we are,
                 side by side
                 you. and. I.



                   holdin' on  
                      to you
                      so tight
                      it seems
                      I'll never
                      let you go



mind's reelin';
and I've got this feelin'
that I could touch the ceilin'
you got me so high
that I think I could fly
and kiss the tears from your eye

               stop reelin'
                 I've got the same feelin'
                 I'll meet you on the ceilin'
                 because I am so high
                 that I know I could fly
                 but there are no tears in my eye



                    up here
                      so high
                      holdin'; on  
                      to you
                      so tight
                      it seems
                      I'll never
                      let you go

                      

I'll hold you forever
                 
                 forever in your arms

                   I'll never
                      let you go

© 2012 w


Author's Note

w
Normal = Male Voice
Italics = Female Voice
Bold = Both Voices

Ignore formatting

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fourth stanza is genius. wows

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful. ♫ ♪ ♫
I could hear it...

Nicely done!!

What kind of musical accompaniment you have in mind for this just curious? or would you keep the acapella?

E.L.



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

w

12 Years Ago

A slow 4/4 beat with rough guitar (lots of reverb) and ... imagine a slow punk beat.

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