hh60 :hope hovers

For the brave men and women of the uscg. And the efforts of the hh60 helo teams at Kodiak Air station. "So others may live"

Praying for daylight bagging for blue sky hoping something starts going right tonight. Ready to meet the tide ready to fight for life ready to try and stay alive. Will this thred pulce fade by the time we reach the sand? Will this hope we hold be taken like the breath of man?
Take me to the sun take me to the sky take me to a place where i might
not die. Hold me in your arms till the wold below blink bright then bring me
back to earth in the pale moon light.

Author's Note

Feel incomplete but unsure what elce to say

Reviews

[Heather]

i could feel myself tearing up at this beautiful poem i mean wow, i personally think these words are loud enough on their own and need no more but if you feel its incomplete maybe add another last line and then see if it is to your standards. overall another great job! :D

[Scout Ventures]

Thanks! Glad you think it's okay!

[Sami Khalil]

"Take me to the sun take me to the sky take me to a place where i might
not die. Hold me in your arms till the wold below blink bright then bring me
back to earth in the pale moon light."
A splendid read and write...Thank you for posting...:)

[Scout Ventures]

Thank you for reading and thanks also reviewing!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)