what elce

What else could it be? That you'd have grace for me
And when it came down to the time you lean
out of your seat. Longing for my words to you
dear Lord i believe.

And you did what no one elce could do
you gave your life for me so id give mine to you.
And just as your will leads my life so my own mind I've
sacrificed.

Father you're all I'll that I'll ever need.
You saved my life so i believe.
Love faith hope and brownie batter
those being things that really matter!

Reviews

[Heather]

i love this as always what can I say that I haven't already before this is just wow. AMAZING!! It flows and is short and meaningful I L.O.V.E the rhyming all the way through I think it gives it that extra umph! I love the last two lines they are my favourite it's as if you took the words right out of my mouth! As always its fabulous which it was obviously gonna be with you having written it! Keep writing because then you will develop your skills to a higher level and practice makes perfect!!! :D

[Scout Ventures]

Thanks Heather! Your reviews always make me feel good!!! :D

[Heather]

your welcome you deserve it and its what i'm here for! oh amd today i had to write an informal letter in english cuz some other people were finishing off coursework and i dedicated it to u! and realised we are odd people who have odd convo's lol :)

[Scout Ventures]

Aww that was sweet! And yes we do! At least we aren't boring;) right?

[Heather]

true true we are weird and clumsy at heart and proud! and you are sweet too seen as we are complimenting each other well be getting all emotional in a minute! :D

[Scout Ventures]

Here here!!! Proud to be!

[Heather]

it also means we are just to amazing for other people to understand, i think we confuse them!!! :D

[Scout Ventures]

I couldn't agree more;)