In Her Eyes

In Her Eyes

A Poem by Scrawl

When you first start to care about somebody that look in their eyes is burned into your memory, so when their gone their eyes is what haunts you. or at least for me it is.

When I look into her eyes
I see all those lies
The look in them are making me pay
For who I am to this day

I see into her very soul
As mine grows dark and dull
I'm not the same I use to be
I barely say hello then i flee

I feel like a ninja blending into the night
Struggling with an internal fight
The look in her eyes is burned in my brain
The joy we once had is causing my pain

Why did I survive I shouldn't be here
Her finding out what I've become is what I fear
While looking into her eyes
I see my torcher I see my demise

© 2010 Scrawl

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wow this is really good..keep writing:)

Posted 14 Years Ago

Other than the lack of punctuation, a possible spelling error, and a few gramatical errors, this is great.
Truly, the content is wonderful.
The way you brought it all together makes it even better.
Good job(:

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on May 28, 2010
Last Updated on August 21, 2010
Tags: love, eye, her, women, pain, lose




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