Acrostic Poetry ... is like an archer . Its all line up and dead center . Not much to say here . Elisa Laura I have known so well . I call here Seamless . She as well as you write and weave seamless verse and flows like prestine crystal clear stream ..
Acrostic Poetry ... is like an archer . Its all line up and dead center . Not much to say here . Elisa Laura I have known so well . I call here Seamless . She as well as you write and weave seamless verse and flows like prestine crystal clear stream ..
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Sigh.... and another one. :) How beautiful it is, to feel a sunrise, and even the rays of light on your skin... we in the North, are too often in grey hues, and shades... so the Sun when he's out, makes it super special each time... we really treasure his light...and the circle in this beautiful acrostic piece goes, down, and will be reborn again, into another deja-vu.... of a new bright day. I love your old English here, it gives a atmosphere of the forlorn beauty, and ancient times, we hold so near, to our hearts, it's the simplicity of beauty I read here, and of "being" for it continues on a natural way... each day, each year, for ages... yes, eternal, beautiful ending, it's soooo eternal, sister... thank you for spreading your talent on this page, and leave your beautiful heart.... in ink :)
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
I love reading what you get out of my scribbles, because you see within and beyond. Thank you for su.. read moreI love reading what you get out of my scribbles, because you see within and beyond. Thank you for such an amazing review, Lis x
10 Years Ago
The pleasure is all mine Shell... you are a gifted writer... I am addicted to your work! :) anytime,.. read moreThe pleasure is all mine Shell... you are a gifted writer... I am addicted to your work! :) anytime, will come by for more! -x- :)
10 Years Ago
It means a lot. You know I admire your writing much :) I'll be back for yours also x
10 Years Ago
Take all your time, my writings will be hanging in here, like weightless particles of nothingness..... read moreTake all your time, my writings will be hanging in here, like weightless particles of nothingness... ;) until someone as you will feel what they mean :) my sweet friend :) -x-
Never dear... we have our own time always, p.s. this music brings me to a music box dance, from anot.. read moreNever dear... we have our own time always, p.s. this music brings me to a music box dance, from another time.... :) forgot to tell you, how good your taste is.... :)
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Lizzy ^^ We merely have the same ears.
10 Years Ago
Hah! Shell true that! ♫ :D my eclectic Sis...... ^^
This is so pretty (and I'm not just saying that because you chose to use Chrono Cross in the background ;) ). My favorite line was "Underneath an indigo sky to sprinkle life once again" because it really breathed renewal and just the freshness of the dawning day.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much :) I picked the music almost specifically for that line actually. I thought the im.. read moreThank you so much :) I picked the music almost specifically for that line actually. I thought the image of sprinkling life would go well in hand with the twinkling sounds of "Dream Fragments".
:) It happens to be my first attempt at pulling together an acrostic poem, so I'm thrilled there are.. read more:) It happens to be my first attempt at pulling together an acrostic poem, so I'm thrilled there are people who find it any good.
Wow! Me too just seeing someone as beautiful as you love seeing my excitement and feel happy and mak.. read moreWow! Me too just seeing someone as beautiful as you love seeing my excitement and feel happy and make smile in the face to make the world more delight and peaceful living.
Thanks for "haha" .. I loved your "haha" It made my day!
11 Years Ago
Two weeks later, that's brilliant, hah. Have a good one, Nèon :)
11 Years Ago
Ha!
Opps! Sorry!
But am glad to hear a word by an angel "BRILLIANT" .. and by th.. read moreHa!
Opps! Sorry!
But am glad to hear a word by an angel "BRILLIANT" .. and by the way, i again love your "hah" ;)
Ha!
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