Sunrise

Sunrise

A Poem by Michelle N. H.

Sunlight fractures in bright rays and rests on your skin

Underneath an indigo sky to sprinkle life once again

Nature draws a smile for the birth of another dawn

Regret not what went before says thou by way of song

In the light persists forever where one cannot do wrong

Sense all as all is whilst you ascend from sleep

Eternal love is you and so eternity is yours to keep

© 2018 Michelle N. H.


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Michelle N. H.

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Acrostic Poetry ... is like an archer . Its all line up and dead center . Not much to say here . Elisa Laura I have known so well . I call here Seamless . She as well as you write and weave seamless verse and flows like prestine crystal clear stream ..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Acrostic Poetry ... is like an archer . Its all line up and dead center . Not much to say here . Elisa Laura I have known so well . I call here Seamless . She as well as you write and weave seamless verse and flows like prestine crystal clear stream ..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sigh.... and another one. :) How beautiful it is, to feel a sunrise, and even the rays of light on your skin... we in the North, are too often in grey hues, and shades... so the Sun when he's out, makes it super special each time... we really treasure his light...and the circle in this beautiful acrostic piece goes, down, and will be reborn again, into another deja-vu.... of a new bright day. I love your old English here, it gives a atmosphere of the forlorn beauty, and ancient times, we hold so near, to our hearts, it's the simplicity of beauty I read here, and of "being" for it continues on a natural way... each day, each year, for ages... yes, eternal, beautiful ending, it's soooo eternal, sister... thank you for spreading your talent on this page, and leave your beautiful heart.... in ink :)

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Never dear... we have our own time always, p.s. this music brings me to a music box dance, from anot.. read more
Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Lizzy ^^ We merely have the same ears.

10 Years Ago

Hah! Shell true that! ♫ :D my eclectic Sis...... ^^
This is perfect, a wonderful write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

11 Years Ago

Wow, many thanks :)
This is so pretty (and I'm not just saying that because you chose to use Chrono Cross in the background ;) ). My favorite line was "Underneath an indigo sky to sprinkle life once again" because it really breathed renewal and just the freshness of the dawning day.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) I picked the music almost specifically for that line actually. I thought the im.. read more
Nice creativity. all letters stood out tall. very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

11 Years Ago

Thank you, emrick!
Inspiring...I should read it every sunrise.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

11 Years Ago

:) It happens to be my first attempt at pulling together an acrostic poem, so I'm thrilled there are.. read more
Wahhh .. what a cool fullform of sunrise .. lol I loved it. Your cool .. am gonna give ya 100/100. Keep on.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neon

11 Years Ago

Wow! Me too just seeing someone as beautiful as you love seeing my excitement and feel happy and mak.. read more
Michelle N. H.

11 Years Ago

Two weeks later, that's brilliant, hah. Have a good one, Nèon :)
Neon

11 Years Ago

Ha!
Opps! Sorry!

But am glad to hear a word by an angel "BRILLIANT" .. and by th.. read more
awww how great to acknowledge our amazing star in this way..

you've made her so proud she's beaming in my windows right now

lovely
Antonio :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

11 Years Ago

Haha, that's so sweet :) Thanks, Antonio!
Antonio Valentino

11 Years Ago

you're very welcome Michelle :)
A positive and beauty poem. I like the use of the word SUNRISE. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this :)

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Added on November 17, 2013
Last Updated on November 7, 2018
Tags: acrostic, sunrise, nature, indigo, sky, love, sleep, light, life, eternity, forever

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Michelle N. H.
Michelle N. H.

Denmark



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I'm Michelle. To strangers I may seem reluctant, but I'm really quite open towards those that are patient and genuinely interested in getting to know me. I think a lot. I'm hardly ever bored. I've.. more..

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