Silent comprehension

i saw you in a dream

and your shapes were

recognizable.

it's how i know,

i loved you,

before i had

let you in.

it's a beautiful thing,

perceiving yourself

in someone else,

and i know you more,

than for this moment,

i sanction myself

to imagine.

beyond time

and understanding.

never-ending,

never-ending...

Author's Note

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

Dreams and especially dreams that are so highly sensitive as yours are, can be telling so much, by little detailed sparkles, gems, or signals... even shapes, that just feel right, or even shades, that do... perfumes, smells, colored spectrums, they all give hue, to the feeling in someone's core.

I feel you see your future through these unconcious people, or shapes, and they maybe your past... there is a a red thread attached that feels as familiar as a family bond, or you know like the perfect musical piece, that overwhelms you. And you almost are out of words, to find, but just want to listen.

I do feel you sanction yourself up in higher ways, to get, every maze and gateway of thought, analyzed, and thought over, for you are a hard one on yourself, but, the most beautiful part is; "You already let it in". And it's already there, it has to be "shaped" by you only to become, a more beautiful diamond, as so in spoken word here, or in music... You are a fantastic writer... A dreamcatcher, and one of the most preceiving persons, I know... thank you once again for spreading, the almost "inexplicable" in such beautiful words only you can. -x- :)

- Elisa

[Michelle N. H.]

You simply have a way of noticing the threads and bind them together to make a knot and a unison of what is scattered before you. Sigh. Dank je wel, Lis, for your beautiful words towards my dream and write :) x

Maybe it's such a beautiful Irish knot, I rather see in front of my eyes now... that one is highly brilliant and woven smart together... but I can't not only make a knot, I need two others to complete me there ;) no, thank you Shelly... Michelangeli forever... ;) x

*can not... my head was waving, before I spoke well he he.... xx

[Michelle N. H.]

Those codings, hihi.. and 3 is a magic number ♪ xx

........... ;-) I just got back... omg so much to tell.... ♥ and those codings.... is it almost 3 AM lol? ♫ xx

[Michelle N. H.]

Haha x) I'm excited to hear of it all, hope to see you on Skype, sooner or later. Till' then, enjoy your days ♥ xx

Hi Sis.... oh have much to tell from my travels, made you pics!! :) catch up soon! hej hej hon!

[NeiL ArandA]

I know I read someone who dislike music or song mixing with their piece. But here I see that it's possible and able to successfully reconcile both. Striking balance and harmony. Song can indeed accentuate if not compliments a piece. Here I can see that taste blending well.
As I read this piece. It reminds me of a band that once very popular back in the late 90's. Their music were indeed awesome but they disbanded after some few albums release. Anyways. This piece reminds me of their one famous song " I knew I love you before I met you " by Savage Garden ...

I saw you in a dream
And your shape were recognizable
It's how I know
I love you
Before I had let you in

Simple. short but beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing your thoughts ..... The Sparrow

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Your title is really nice and intriguing, the silence is not heavy between lovers or close ones...I like how you put the lines, as if I see your dream, it sounds a bit like a far away song. My favorite verses are the last, as there is the essence of all - love- beyond time and understanding - never-ending...The last words repeat and create the illusion of endless repeating, as if all in our lives repeat. Brilliant!

i sanction myself
to imagine.
beyond time
and understanding.
never-ending,
never-ending...

[Michelle N. H.]

The silence is not heavy, I really like that expression. Thank you :) I wanted the ending to have that feel, of something everlasting.

[Michelle N. H.]

Recurring, repeating, a full circle..

[joshua deathdealer]

Beautiful. A love that reaches through space, time and even subconsciousness will never end. It will carry us throughout life and greet us in the beyond. Wonderful work. xx

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you ^^ I have the same faith. It's untainted and eternal.

[joshua deathdealer]

Your welcome Michelle. Oh and thanks for the friends request.

[Michelle N. H.]

No worries, I'm glad you accepted :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Of course. Your an awesome poetess and I'm drawn to your style. Plus your a bestie with one of my besties so it was an offer I couldn't refuse.

[Michelle N. H.]

I see ^^ Well, thank you very much. I think highly of your pen as well, so it means a great deal.

[Devesh]

"it's a beautiful thing,
perceiving yourself
in someone else"

Indeed it is. And you capture the complexity amazingly with simple words. Great job, Michelle, read a poem of yours after a long time and I enjoyed it a lot! Good work :)

[Michelle N. H.]

That makes my evening. Thank you, Devesh ^^

[Devesh]

I'm glad it does. You're most welcome :)

[Anand Sehgal]

i sanction myself

to imagine.

beyond time

and understanding.

never-ending,

the music got perfectly blended with these lines :)

Loved the write my dear :)
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[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you, Anand. I'm happy :)

[Anand Sehgal]

:) my pleasure dear . happy to see you happy :)

[David Scott]

These people and this connection is a special gift few people will find. There are dreamers and "prophets". There are those who see more and those who perceive beyond typical human abilities.
The power of the mind is seldom tapped to connect to the powers of the cosmos. This is the same power available in human interaction.
I see a spiritual level as well as a philosophical exploration.
Interesting write. I enjoyed it.

[Michelle N. H.]

This power of the mind, I find that it concerns itself around belief and heart. Doors open when you let them and vice versa. Often times we're just not aware of what we draw in, subconsciously, and that's from where decisions are made, for the most part. All have the potential to expand their mind's capabilities, but that's what the majority neglects, I feel. I'm glad you did enjoy the read, and I love the words you shared with me here. Thank you :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and when we see ourselves in someone else, see our dreams in someone else, we certainly hope and pray that it is never ending...

nicely penned.

jacob

[Michelle N. H.]

For sure. Thank you, Jacob ^^