WITHIN 4

I know you're thinking things
against me, my acts and
the way I deal with you. I sensed
that even your way too far
and even online.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Quite a incredible short write that holds a fact about the unseen things online, and unseen people behind the screens who think things that we may never know, or tell. I really like this write, it's real.

[lady france]

wow wonderful,,you can be a good dog sniffer..hehe

[Katelyn]

Great poem! Just one minor mistake I found that you wrote "your" instead of "you're" but you did a good job! :)

[Emerald Seas]

This gave me a chuckle!

[Amata Luna]

hahaha, now this has got some form. I'm pretty puzzled who's the person behind all these "inspirations"? ;) nice one, just again.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Short to the point and quite pleasant to read.

[jennifer little]

short poem great job keep up the good work ......

[AK]

Nice..it seems so mysterious and ooh! Great write!

[CHRIS ANDES]

haha
witty
=]

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong thoughts in this poem. A wise person learn not to pay attention to negative. Try to find positive people and thoughts.
Coyote