YOURE VERY NOISY

It sucks when someone
screams at your face even if
you don't have a fault!

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Truthful short write you have here.

[Seanne Tholltree]

thank you again vicky..

[Coyote Poetry]

Very true words. Yelling doesn't fix problems. Only causes more. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Amata Luna]

This is short. But once again, blunt with emotions. ;)

[S. Michael Long]

it does slap in the face for sure.. (: well done -s

[CHRIS ANDES]

haha,
you do it well seanne =]

[Robbie~xoxo~]

So true...it does. Emotions can feel intense when that happens. Nice Senryu!

[Gene Hiccup]

oh, i know we all each have a freedom in doing literary pieces but your style confuses me a little, i mean like this one, it seems more of a statement rather than a poem dont you think so?

[MoriartyMesa]

I like that when I opened this, it slapped me in the face. I respect that.