School

School

A Poem by Rivaxorus

If only if only
School started a little later
Maybe then
I would actually learn something

© 2013 Rivaxorus


Author's Note

Rivaxorus
If only it started two hours later then it did, I would be so much happier.

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Oh that's such a true statement, especially coming from a high school student. I'll tell you what though, being able to create your own schedule in college is one of the greatest freedoms I've ever experienced! Don't sweat it though, believe me high school flies by and it's over before you know it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Haha, I got kicked out in the 10th grade from my English lit class for sleeping. That teacher hated me though cause I corrected her on a pronunciation once. Good times :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


I relate for sure, first thing in the morning I am next to useless even to this day.
I like the straight forward, here it is kind of style here. You make this relatable to so much more than just school though at least I know I felt it. In fact I felt like I just got up after reading it, it brought me back to this morning.
Thanks
Chris

Posted 11 Years Ago


"than" it did sweetie. No truer words were felt by a 15 yr old student. I have always been passionate about my dreams, and sleep was something I used to love to do so, I hear what you are laying down sista.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Man ! where do you come up with brilliant ideas. I love this one...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh that's such a true statement, especially coming from a high school student. I'll tell you what though, being able to create your own schedule in college is one of the greatest freedoms I've ever experienced! Don't sweat it though, believe me high school flies by and it's over before you know it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cute write, but i doubt if that ever happens.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rivaxorus

11 Years Ago

Pffft I know, I just can't wait for college so I can handle my time more, My braain functions easie.. read more
This is so true, I remember falling asleep in high school during first and seconf period XD But after it hit past 8:00 am i was wide awake. Loved it.
~Res

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rivaxorus

11 Years Ago

Yeah, second period(spanish) is my nap period xD I get ready to do work and then end up in some weir.. read more
a brilliant idea...
I like that you have shared this short but cute write
hey and adults feel that way to....the darn bed is so comfy!!
Thank you for sharing much

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha, this made me laugh. This was good, school does start too early but I guess if we started later we would finish later and the problem with that in some places is that little kids would be walking home in the dark...... I liked it. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rivaxorus

11 Years Ago

Well I live in california, like the ghetto part, so getting out when we do is really no better no wo.. read more
s y e

11 Years Ago

Fair enough

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Rivaxorus
Rivaxorus

Apple Valley, CA



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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..

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