Breath

Breath

A Stage Play by Rivaxorus

As soon as I thought I was lost
He found me
In that dark room where I was holding my breath
For as long as I could remember
I was terrified of the outside world
Out of the cave was a world foreign to me
Kid was there, exploring when he found my mask
He took it from me
And Told me that he'd keep it on tabs for me
Kid showed me how to be whole again
How to converse
That even though there are things to be afraid of
The outside world could be an amazing thing
I never found myself lost again
Unless Kid wasn't there.

© 2013 Rivaxorus


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Author's Note

Rivaxorus
My fursona's monologue to my love's fursona kid. She means the world to me, so I thought to write a monologue and draw a picture to go with it.

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Wow good job. Looking to read more from you.
~Res

Posted 11 Years Ago


sweet!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Both pieces of art - picture and writing - really well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Such an endearing monologue! Full of hope and renewal of life. I love that this is about two fursonas and your art is outstanding.

Posted 11 Years Ago


We're never alone when there is someone out there that holds a part of us. *even if it is our masks that we sometimes wear* Nice read and the art as well.


Posted 11 Years Ago


Rivaxorus

11 Years Ago

Yeah my fursona physically has a dinosaur skull mask which represents her demon form, more or less m.. read more
A great job. An enjoyable read...Keep up the magic...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Rivaxorus
Rivaxorus

Apple Valley, CA



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