Nightmare

Nightmare

A Poem by Sel Sense

Dreaming

#running
#sweating
#panting

Still dreaming

#falling
#cupid...arrow
#screaming

Awake

#heart racing
#help
#...in love

Nightmare!

© 2013 Sel Sense


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Sel Sense
experimental so please give an honest review

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Sorry ,it doesn't do anything for me.
EXCEPT :-)
I love your bravery to experiment and be creative. Keep using your creativeness the way you feel.
What may work for No one at anytime may just work for everyone.for you.
It's all in being you! and true to yourself.
You might even write stuff that you don't like, but everyone else does.
Nice job ! Edison, Tesla,Franklin and newton would be proud of you :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sel Sense

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much. That's really encouraging
LOL...amusing...very cute...clever.
This made me smile...!!!!

Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sel Sense

10 Years Ago

Thank you Scott
love is a mental problem. This is worthy of tokens. I like ur style

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on December 11, 2013
Last Updated on December 11, 2013
Tags: love, dream, nightmare, cupid


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