Does She?

I heard you're dating someone;

a girl just caught your eye.

Tell me about this new love,

the cause of your "Goodbye".

 

Does she greet you good morning

with breakfast in your bed?

Does she know your fav'rite songs

and sing them in her head?

 

Does she kiss you 'til you're breathless

and treat you like a prince?

Does she keep all your love letters,

not throwing them in bins?

 

Does she sing in the shower

and waltz on the floor?

Does she fix your black necktie

and wave bye from the door?

 

Does she pack up your lunch,

a sandwich with a note?

Does she send you thoughtful texts,

an "I love you" and a quote?

 

Does she understand your hobbies,

the cigars and the games?

Does she also love your friends,

the quirks behind the names?

 

Does she miss you when you're gone

and wait 'til you're back?

Does she offer better things,

all the things that I lack?

 

Does she love you like I did

or does she love you even more?

And darling, does she even know

she has all I'm wishing for?

 

Author's Note

Original link: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/arzeljoy_blu/1257027/

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poetry. Life is a lesson. We always miss what we cannot have.
"Does she love you like I did
or does she love you even more?
And darling, does she even know
she has all I'm wishing for?"
The above lines are known by the many of us. Thank you Blue for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a question we often wonder when someone we love goes with another. Well articulated, flowing and nicely done.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I still think you are one of the best writers on here Blue.
Another brilliant piece.
Was so romantic, but heartbreaking and sad.
Your poetry is so meaningful, always tells quite a story.
I loved this piece
Also rhyming was brilliant :)

[Blue]

Cimmy, I missed ya! Sorry I haven't been here for a long time. How are you? I'll check your profile.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I missed you to hunny.
I am good yer thanks for asking.
Hope you are good :)
Cool :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow what a beautiful poem!!!
P.S Not only is this a beautiful piece but I am a true sucker for poems that rhyme :-)

[Blue]

Thank you, BB!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

You are very welcome!

[Jack...]

So very deep and poignant questions my friend. Written in such fine poetic fashion. Very nice.

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Jack!

[stars are far]

Does she know that she is owning a treasure
Or she is just using you to take away her pressure ?
Does she hugs you from the back and kiss your head
And will she ever take away all of what you dread ?

Please if anyone knows her name, I must know
To itch her name of the moon stone
Under the biggest title that hit your eyes
The only lover that killed a child ..

Just few lines i liked to add, I CAN RELATE TO THIS
I loved it ..loved it,.loved it..
It tells my words..in your poem ..well done

[Blue]

Thank you for sharing your insights, Suhad!

[stars are far]

My pleasure