Gravity

I await the day
of when my forgotten half
will find me.

I suffer the night
to someday feel his embrace
console me.

I will wait,
I will wonder,
I will be patient.

He will find me,

He will find me.

Reviews

[Flow]

find me.. nice and simple. I enjoy the simplicity and creativity of your flow.

[Sarah]

Wonderful piece.

"He will find me,
He will find me."

I love this ending. It's as if in the first line she's really just saying it to convince herself and in the second one she decided to believe that it is true.

Keep up the great work!

[Cal Vance]

ill find my girl too,this is beautiful just like you!

[An owl on the moon]

Love the simple and soft tone, as night longs for day and the embrace of love. The echo at the end seems to be a firm assurance that love will rise on you like the morning sun. Can't wait to read more!

[thecoolone52]

ohhh its one of those ghost lover kind of poems... dude theres a title right there ghost lover...... hahaha maybe not i dont know... maybe future lover or something hahaha anyway nice poem i enjoyed it!!!