Sublimation

A request...based on the image. I do hope you enjoy. :)

 

 

Sublimation
The Bell Tower tolls

ringing in the grey winter morn

silent sunlight fades

misty hallway emerges

The winding wind lingers

brushing its frozen fingertips

caressing Father Time

The patient pathway leads on

a beacon pleading through the mystique

calling on her fading weakness

enrapturing him with her silence

Until the hour

that crimson ice lands in shattered shards

crunching

under the weight of his dissipating footsteps

Reviews

[Forest Green]

...the emerging misty hallway that appears places the reader within the center of the hazy melody...what a beautiful description of that time of day, year, season, when seeing isn't easy and familiar landmarks take on a storied tone.

Excellent movement through the shadows of dissipating footsteps.

Daniel

Wow you are a good writer and I am glad that you have shared this one with me... I can't wait till I read more of your writing!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very erie but captivating piece, I can sense a ghost of the past emerging out of the fog sending chills down my spine. What great images you invoke with your words.

[Creepy Swine Guy]

That is just an amazing write that just sings so beautifully to the photo. I can almost feel the crisp winter air and hear the whispering breeze in the words of your lovely poem.

[Dani California]

This is marvelous! You have a true gift of bringing your reader into your words.... I love the imagery and can feel the environment you've created, without the visual aide. Although, that's an awesome graphic as well!

This is truly a wonderful poem!

Excellent writing!

Peace, Dani

[robin]

Okay okay I'll lighten up....shhhheeeeeesssshhhh! LOL This poem rocks rocks rocks! I so dig its romance and reaching out to heal the wounded healer, it wanders like a highwayman who loves a forgotten waitress. It's like the first sip of the best coffee in the AM.

[lilain]

Oh, this is lovely! I can feel the cool winter, see the "frozen fingertips" and the "crimson ice". Girl, you got good words and good visions.

I love this one!

[Periac]

aplause to you...you amaze me everytime......you do

[An owl on the moon]

You have such a wonderful way of capturing a moment in time and bringing us so vividly into your world! A magical image captured timelessly by your enchanting words... Brilliant!

[Brandon]

Very nice job on this piece. It was very well worded.