Tovli

PainfullySilent,TimeCourt, MillWounds, MarkSecrets, LoveEyes. for Tovli's Ten

Tovli was Painfully Silent, as the sands of seconds passed over him

like shadows of a sundial turning a beacon of desperate darkness every minute

Time beat the moments in his mind like a tennis Court of injustice. 

What did he do?, to Mill in darkness. it looms no bride just doom.
The blood trickles out from internal Wounds like childhood lessons, well groomed.
The seed marinating in a Marked womb and Kiddo's Secrets safe in Her tomb.
Still his Life captured by gravity to ponder in a pool of white and red cells
like Drowning feather quills in inkwells to scribe the surprise of Holy Hell
Scribbled to church bells ringing and gunshots revenging, Exhale.
His Love slain Her Eyes cradled by deceit laid to rest by Bill's cold feet.

Author's Note

"This tall drink of cocksucker ain't dead!"

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

WOW!...an intriguing write indeed!
I watched Kill Bill, and I have to admit, I was captivated!...I have a very weak stomach for violence, but the movie definitely grabbed me...
You have written a very spot on piece! Nicely done..this is a unique write, my friend.

"The blood trickles out from internal Wounds like childhood lessons, well groomed.
The seed marinating in a Marked womb and Kiddo's Secrets safe in Her tomb."

[Sethnicity]

Thanks Robbie... I may try and stroll up your ally in the future once I get off the fighting hate crime train for a much needed breather later this year... and then I can start writing some intimacy/sensual romantic love pieces! :D

[Souladareatease]

A most fitting write to accompany this Tale!!!
I deeply enjoyed the pace of this write as well--quite witty!!!

[Frieda P]

You got the ten in there alright, sounded like an abortion of sorts...intriguing read! Boggles the mind...in a good way.

[Sethnicity]

glad I could finally capture your interest. I know most of the time my dandelion lines dangle ridiculous in your stratosphere. I'm glad this settled on your doorstep where you could commandeer.

[Ruth]

I love to return and read you :)
As always honey, powerful...you reel it and spin it and leave me somewhere dislodged in a good way lol
xoxo

[Sethnicity]

Thanks Poppy! I swear I will start having more time during the summer! and we can start chit chatting again!