Us and The End

Us and The End

A Poem by Sethnicity
"

A war within US.

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Where do We go from Hear?
There's nothing left to sever
cause you just ate your ears
Their is no 1 willing to deliver
the Kind-Ness-sities of Life,
of Love,
No 1 can stand to give It ^.

We can race to the Moon and find Nothing there
Yet We litter our flags like worn underwear.
Though, My words are Frost Bitten Lakes of Reality
Stricken by Tundra and Tobacco leaf
Hidden by the Blister of Blizzard Breeze
Like locos voting on policies
policies to put them on the streets

These words May never reach beyond,
My F**k n Brain
this Cold War We Never win
10 Adam Bombs to Send
US and Them
a swifty end
A bloody Post card to God
that says " HA HA Amen"
The End

© 2012 Sethnicity


Author's Note

Sethnicity
Suggested Listening: "Sever" by Karate
Don't ignore the spelling.... Think about the layers of meaning..
This is an old writing of mine.

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Though, My words are Frost Bitten Lakes of Reality
Stricken by Tundra and Tobacco leaf
Hidden by the Blister of Blizzard Breeze-- Very nice, Seth. Also, glad you suggested Karate, I hadn't listened to them in quite a while! You were right, the two paired well. Great write. I miss the good ol' days when we lived together and I was free to peruse your journals of writings whenever I chose. Always an enchanting escape to be found. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sethnicity

11 Years Ago

oh... I had no Idea you sifted through the random expanse of my lyrical mind.... hummm.
Kristallo

11 Years Ago

Just when you think you're safe in your own private little bubble.. I come along and *POP* into your.. read more



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Blasphemous is it not? How we chew each other up on the name of God? And the race to the moon...fascinating...however; our intentions were less-likely sincere in the name of Evolution and science.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a poignant and mesmerizing piece of nothingness you feel. I love the way you expose it into words. The end, is so ironic, you make me laugh, sorry friend, it's just brilliant, you know... old writing or not, it's freaking good!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'Fascinating form' is the first thing that comes to mind: i noticed the off meter, noticed reasons for the intended the mis-spellings and almost understood, re-read, understood. found the writing mesmerising! The second stanza flies!

This is powerful, full of intention and heart; words to blazon across the skies and/or wavelengths.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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