Always Near

Always Near

A Poem by ShAb
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Sometimes even Destiny is helpless

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Always Near...

I'll never go away,
never bid you a farewell,
Into Unknown terrains,
I'll never travel without you.

And If you plan to leave,
I'll follow you as your shadow,
I'll come in your joys-,
as your beautiful smile.
I'll come in your sorrows-,
as the mist in your eyes,
I'll make an avatar of myself,
in your every breath.

Like a scented flower,
aura will leave a trail.
An honest bee, will follow,
Till heart renders frail.

We'll create new memories,
Along the updown route,
To eternal bliss as One-,
My endless pursuit.

[Always near,
no matter the distance,
no matter destiny,
cause with you,
even destiny surrenders]

© 2010 ShAb


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True love, by its nature, is irreducible and cannot be vanquished by time nor distance. Like the waves of a dreaming ocean, it always reaches the shore.

Your sentiment is beautifully expressed, scripted with poignancy and refinement.

Linda Marie Van Tassell

Posted 10 Years Ago


always near...the memory; beautifully expressed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was nice with words flowing with ease and emotions..there is one suggestion i have,the word avatar somehow doesn't fit in.The rest of it is perfect.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sweet but it haunts me too. I want air to breathe just reading it. I love the tone, the message and the imagery in this fascinating poem. I enjoyed your poem very much.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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ShAb
ShAb

Exeter, Devon, United Kingdom



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