Thank you.

To those who saved my life.

I’ve never been good with computers, and I’m really bad at math. I was never one of those "cool kids," I simply walked my own path.

I'm never really for certain, and I'm only kind of for sure. I'm mostly always indifferent, But I will always wish I was her.

That one with the smile that could light up a room, the one with the perfect makeup and expensive perfume.

The one with the right hair, the right smile and clothes, The one that everyone always seems to know.

But then you walked into my life, and everything suddenly changed. My whole world was turned upside down and completely rearranged.

You showed me God, love and hope,
You held my hand when I couldn’t cope,
When I went astray, you brought me back,
You gave me everything I never had,
You showed me life, and taught me to live,
You showed me trust and how to give,

And now, when I look at you, what I do see, is every little thing that make me happy, Because

You showed me God, love and hope,
You held my hand when I couldn’t cope,
When I went astray, you brought me back,
You gave me everything I never had,
You showed me life, and taught me to live,
You showed me trust and how to give,

And now to you I say, Thank You, for saving my life.

Author's Note

one of my newer poems.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

nicely done. Very lyrical

[hmm]

deep powerful write that is well expressed! I personally like your last stanza.

[SilentDreamer]

Very well written, I really loved reading this. It starts out kind of sad but in the end is happy and shows there's hope. A great peice of poetry, nice job!

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This is wonderful, i like the emotions, heartfelt write

[ariel-the-little-mermai..]

Wow this is really good I know how it feels to be like that
Keep it up I enjoyed reading it
♥Ariel-the-little-mermaid