Tick Tock

Tick Tock

A Poem by Obscured by the Shadows
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Tick tock, tick tock...

"

Tick tock, tick tock

my clock is telling me

that I am late, I'm late

for a very important date.

 

The queen has called me to her castle, 

the cards are surrounding me

falling all around.

It is clear that I was late

for that very important date.

 

Oh no,

there goes

my small white fluffy head.

Falling to the ground 

like the cards I saw before.

 

The red queen

holds no mercy for me in her heart

nor for anyone else.

 

If it wasn't for her jabberwocky, 

a beast so large and cruel,

we'd have taken back our kingdom.

It would have been her head that fell.

 

Tick tock, tick tock

my clock is telling me

that I am late, I'm late

for a very important date.

 

Down with the bloody red queen.

 

© 2016 Obscured by the Shadows


Author's Note

Obscured by the Shadows
Obviously I was inspired by Alice in Wonderland, it is in the view point of the white rabbit.

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clever, i liked it...i remember reading that book as a child, i loved it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Obscured by the Shadows

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, glad you liked it c:

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Added on March 10, 2016
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