In A Moment

In A Moment

A Poem by Shadows Ember

It's strange how in such a short time,
Someone can become important to you.
Someone who not long ago, 
You seemed to barely know.
This one person you barely noticed,
Somehow seeming to be everything you've ever wanted.
This person, 
This long lost prince of sorts,
Being the reason for your smile,
Your happiness.
And suddenly,
The world falls into place again.
And everything you believed in the past becomes a distant memory,
And he is your present,
And hopefully,
Your future.

© 2014 Shadows Ember


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Yes Your falling in love Its a wonderful thing and its heaven sent. A very fine place to be the mystery place in your life. Whole lots of changes going on at a very special time a new adventure is beginning to form without alarm. Have a wonderful experience.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was a nicely done piece.
Captures the fleeting moments of hopeless love experienced in the early stages of a relationship.
Well Done.
Thank you for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well written piece of poetry.
Thank you for sharing i enjoyed it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


very well crafted.anything can happen in a moment and this has been beautifully portrayed in your poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is well written. I really like it. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


"This long lost prince of sorts,
Being the reason for your smile,
Your happiness.
And suddenly,
The world falls into place again."

Well written and conveyed. Bravo..............

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love. Such a wonderful and amazing feeling ! Keep up the good work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is how I feel currently, it is an astonishing thing to fall in love so suddenly.. ♡ I love this poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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You have a perception of life, that will take you places

Being the reason for your smile,
Your happiness.
And suddenly,
The world falls into place again

Great work I like these words

Posted 9 Years Ago


The beauty about writing is there is no expertise, only piercing realization of self. You seem to have an excellent rhetorical comprehension of your emotions so keep going. If you stop (like I have time and time again) your inner voice becomes burdened with whisper and insecurity.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Shadows Ember
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My name is Ember. i am 17. Senior in high school, and I love to write, especially romance stories and poems. I'm not an expert so bear with me. My favorite author is most definitely Edgar Allen Poe. I.. more..

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