Goodbye

My young sister was born ill and she had passed away before she was 2 years old.

It's an emotional storm.
I sit alone and I mourn.
First day, she was born,
We got the news I was torn.
Anxiety risin', the Doc' advisin',
It was surprisin'.
I got a sis,
I was too older, I carried her on my shoulder.
I was too glad, I became a brother and a dad,
Then I got sad, as her state was bad.
Only few days that she had.
My tears were fallin' on her dress,
I said goodbye with a kiss,
I know she's lying in a bliss.
Now all I miss is you, sis..

Reviews

[Teresa]

Very emotional but i loved this poem...made me tear up little bit : ( : )But i loved this poem..it gave us readers emtioins on how you may or may not have been feeling at the moment;. Did this really happen ?
I loved this poem.. keep writing and keep in touch