Once I'm In My Bubble Bath

this is a poem i had to write for language arts last year. we had a humor assessment...so this poem is supposed to be funny. but as you can tell after reading this...i kind of failed on the funny factor. hehe =)

Once I'm in my bubble bath,

I like to stir up more.

Half the suds go in my eyes

And half go on the floor.

 

The fun is in the bubbles 'cause

They giggle on my skin

And when I stick them on my face

They dangle from my chin.

 

And when I splash them hard enough

They pop and dissapear

And then my bath time's over 'cause

I've made the water clear.

Author's Note

idk if there are any spelling errors....

Reviews

[Bexers]

This is adorable!!!

I love taking baths and this is basically the same thing that happens to me everytime I get into the bath!!