Just Breath

Just random not really good work just popped out of my head, didnt come out all right

Just Breath

Life can suffocate a strong person

just as easily as a weak one

Life has expectations of people that can be imposible to reach

Life may demand more of you than you are willing to give

Life can destroy you

Life can creat you

Life can control you

You can never control life

So how do we go on?

Without giving up and wallowing in self pity?

We breath

Just breath

Its all we can do

Reviews

[Sharkapillar]

random or not, it's still good!

[Vitamin A]

raw, me gusta
this definitely sounds like a song to me
i have to say i like the self pity part

just one thing... and please don't kill me for this
you spelt breath instead of breathe, but it was probably because you were rushing
splendid for 'just popping out of your head'

[Adeline]

this is short and sweet Shana, I like it!