The green-eyed monster

                                                            You suck                                     You really do

                            All these years

                You've been doing nothing

                         But ruining my life

        Those stupid rumors and lies

        Hide behind your brown eyes

           But there’s a question I must ask

                        Why?

 

                     Sometimes I do wonder

                      What was your reason

                          Sometimes I don’t

                    Who'd waste their time

                  Thinking of a loser like you

      Accusing my winsome anatomy

         Jealousy - that can be creepy

              How could I have been so blind

                                  To your dark green side 

                               

                 Yes, behind those brown eyes

                      Lies an acid green

                           You are

               The green-eyed monster my friend

                 Always hiding under my bed

                   So come and swallow me

                  Innocent brain- a good feed

                     Eat my grace and artistry

                     My green-eyed monster

Author's Note

This poem is about a jealous friend that I passionately hate :P

Reviews

[Becca Bishop]

Wonderful!!! I love how the first words kind've catch you and draw you in...when I read them I was all like "yeah, I know I suck" I was a little sad that you figured it out so soon.... But I kept reading :D and it turns out you didn't know that I suck!!! But I guess since I just told you now you know....anyways.....way off topic here.
I like this one :D :D Especially how you're not really naming what the monster did to you, just...yeah....

[Infinite hexes]

Lol.

[Pax]

my kind of style.... creative, emotive and surprising end...
awesome!

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Capturing, stunning. You really have a boogyman, which everyone has.

[David Scott]

I like how this is not an attack on anouther person but a reflection into your own mind...
Well done and a true look at the real "monster".
Be well.

[MOON]

Lovely poignant write well conveyed.

[DIVYA]

Be careful! He can come back to haunt and spoil the most beautiful of moments!
Poweerful and magical!

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful tale in the poem. Those green-eyed can steal our thoughts and dreams. I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote