We call this an internal dialogue, Yes, Yes we do (Part 3)

Drip...

Drip...

Drip...

Drip...

 

Sweat brims on his brow

What will we do, precious?!

Run!

We can't we are cornered!

Oh no!

We could...

No! No axe!

But but but he will kill us precious!

Oh ok...

Yey! Axeaxeaxeaxe!

Reviews

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

I like it, going to have to read the other parts as well ; )

[Aidz]

I had better read part 1 n 2 oops has me wondering

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

impropitious and relevant, a relaxed piece, well done

[Tasha]

I agree with Lori and Naomi, this was amazing. :)

[Naomi Roseღ]

Exactly what Lori Carlson said :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

This last part is great! I love the sounds and the final resolution. I couldn't help but chuckle at the ending, even though the subject matter is a serious one.

[Sarah Morgan]

Very visual. I like the play of insanity - it also reminds me a bit of lord of the rings, but I doubt golum would be in a coffee shop hehe. It's eery and dark. I enjoyed it.

[Helpless]

so good! so frightening! reminds me of golum (sp?) from lord of the rings

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

now he thinks someone is after him so he is actually putting the axe to hand........wow!