it's getting late

random thoughts

wait a minute..why aren't you in pain?why are you up all night just to eat and watch tv?why are you having such a peace of mind at this time?isn't it getting late?you're missing all the pain,why aren't you doing your best to feel it even once!all you ever felt was something stupid that can't be named..don't you dare and say it was love,young lady!it did hurt?Oh really?!even needles hurt,my dear..does that make you in love with them?absolutely not!THIIS IS your time..now,is the time you're supposed to feel the pain,pain of love!how come you're unable to love!!!you're 21 and you haven't taste it yet?could it be...NO WAY!Oh dear..I'm afraid you're heartless..that's what I call cases like yours,obviously you can't fall in love..those b******s they kept dissapointing you until you made a shield for your own heart to not fall in love..it's getting late but you can't fall in love...yeah it's getting late and I'm,your stupid conscience,disturbing your peace of mind this late at night!yeah..I'll just zip it ...

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"I'm afraid you're heartless..that's what I call cases like yours,obviously you can't fall in love..those b******s they kept disappointing you until you made a shield for your own heart to not fall in love.."


A very good one. Thank you for sharing...:)...........................

[sherifa]

thank U for your opinion ^^

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. Pen on...:)............

[fireblossom]

Very brave and compelling. A look into the mind and heart of a real person. From here springs all poetry and good writing. Thank you sherifa.

[sherifa]

thank you for your opinion ^^

[Samuel Dickens]

I imagine quite a few have had such thoughts, and it's no wonder. One could indiscriminately attach themselves to the first person who comes by, but that would likely end in disaster. Assuming this isn't fiction, I say, "Keep the faith, young lady. Love will not always pass you by".

[sherifa]

yes,it's real...I'm doing my best to keep the faith,thank you anyways ^^

[Jamie R. Robillard Sr.]

Different writing style. Though in my honest opinion it is not so late at 21 :D. Though views may vary drastically from those in your locale.

Tell your conscience and your mum and granmere that you are not that old and just choose to take your time.

Nice write, thanks for sharing.

[sherifa]

well,maybe 21 is not too old,still..not being able to love really sucks specially when you want to

[Jamie R. Robillard Sr.]

Forgive me for being an old man though at your age you are just discovering what love is all about. I think you are being to hard on yourself, honestly. Keep in mind there is a huge difference between not knowing what you are feeling or what to feel and not feeling at all. This poem shows you still have a lot of feeling in you. It is just a matter of time, and yes I know that is the one thing young people do not want to hear. Just maybe you have not found the type of love you are looking for yet, because you just have not found that person to love yet. There is still plenty of time. There is no reason to be in a rush in life, because there is no reason to want to hasten the conclusion. :D

I hope you have a good day, and a wonderful life.

[Pól]

Interesting.
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[sherifa]

thank you ^^

[Pól]

and its not late at all- its very very early!!

[sherifa]

made me feel better ^^