Twinkling Twinkling giant star...

Twinkling Twinkling giant star...

A Poem by Shichan
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A poem dedicated to all the suicidal people, don't give up the world won't be same without you. The poem is written from the star's pov.

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I am a twinkling twinkling giant star,
Oh I wonder who you are?
Looking at me at this hour!
Even though I am so so far,
I see your sparkling eyes, tears flowing.
Not so nice!

What is troubling you, oh I wonder!
Is your mind all clouds and thunder?
Are you feeling all alone?
Even though everyone is home.

Oh I see another lad ,who once looked at me just like you,
No,....he seems worse!
He is standing on the railing....not looking at me..
Tears flowing from his eyes terribly!
I can tell this time he is not gonna flee.

You should go help him if you may.
Oh no! It's too late!
Look at the ground there he lay!

I must say, for some people it's too late earthling.
But I know that you are not a weakling.
So don't give up! And don't you die!
I want to countinue watching your sparkling eyes....

© 2023 Shichan


Author's Note

Shichan
I know I am not good at poetry. Anyway in this the stars looks at a girl crying in despair looking at stars then he looks at the man who ONCE looked at him. Now it's too late for him. But the start tells the girl not to give up. As there is still chance for her

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Added on December 11, 2023
Last Updated on December 11, 2023
Tags: Poem, emotional, suicidal

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Shichan
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I am a 17 year old girl, I have a passion for writing so I am starting to write as a hobby. English isn't my first language so there will be grammatical mistakes. Most of my stories would be sad or ro.. more..

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