love, Sunday morning easy

love, Sunday morning easy

A Poem by Shirlena
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My answer to "he's too nice", that's why i could never love him.

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who suspects amorous notions

screeching beneath flames fervent in opposing directions


is affection extreme kindness

 

stroking tresses unceasingly til arriving at the

small of back petting essence

soulful attention vital parts above nostrils

heart so full having to turn away from as

to avoid unblinking prowess


what is a love that stomps roots

sending weary foundation tumbling to its detriment

 

when is it senseless

evocative honesty leaving paramours

mingled with labored air at tenderness

bound by strength…it’s courage alchemy

continuously spending itself upon intended

switching orb…drained by gratuity

 

lost abilities is to actuate

lord...have mercy

I don’t mind

© 2014 Shirlena


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A brilliant, perceptive, and well conceived piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


We are drawn to certain people for some reasons more than others. Some to the bad ones, others to the nice and noblee ones. But in my opinion we are what we reflect on others and what we need from others that will satisfy us or our craves. lasting ones have to have stronger foundations and communications...Exceelnt ...:)......................

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shirlena

8 Years Ago

I think you are correct Sam...we get what we are. There is something about us that draws a particula.. read more
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

Wow. So true. You are welcome...:)........................
Ha you don't mind but I bet you've lusted many a bad boy, go on admit it Shirlena. ;-)

stroking tresses unceasingly til arriving at the
small of back petting essence

Does sound oh so nice...I love the way you smack me upside the head with your poetry, feels so good......

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shirlena

8 Years Ago

I had crushes on bad boys but that was when I was 12 and 13...I found out that a few supposed nerds .. read more
Shirlena

8 Years Ago

Oh and thanks again for enjoying my poetry...I get so carried away in our talks I forget everything .. read more
Perhaps my friend this will help keep nice guys from always finishing last. Being kind and courteous does seem to have it's drawbacks at times. But in my mind it boils down to showing respect for someone.

Loved your peom today my friend, your work always seems to send my mind into a deep thinking zone.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shirlena

8 Years Ago

I'm really honored that my poetry can possibly lift your spirits...good poetry has the same effect o.. read more

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