she walks like this...

she walks like this...

A Poem by Shirlena
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She may look one way but this is who she is...

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from steadfast squint she could be read

no not an open book…novella

stitching around her dress moved as lips with a dialogue…having purpose

miniscule stature might think easily pushed over

dashing into concrete as porcelain screaming noise into drums

…she doesn’t              

 

 was not chaste to that degree

however,  she is a necessity for whatever moments

talented charming  sadness without a trace if but leaving her number

use her shoulder delicately worn with nod of approval

mellifluous turns favoring dancer’s ankles

intense meaningful cognizance…can prove most unsettling


disturbing


absorb how to survey from perfect angles cause she walks like:

 

 

“I told you I don’t like tight purse strings

a staunch frugal man in my society

may burn once but that’s alright

it will be another’s taunting at dusk by sting of cold sweat

consciousness riddled… exposing recollections

besides... you don’t deceive nobody

reckoning under table pacts of your own fruition”

          

know this…you’ll need before I need


 

she walks



               like that

© 2014 Shirlena


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Sophistication at its best...
may I presume she is woman of stature...
I presume with a description...
like you put into account above...
she walks like that...
she walks the walks and talks the talks...

Posted 8 Years Ago


I picture a confident woman with attitude, and a sarcastic wit. A great and interesting bit of thought here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shirlena

8 Years Ago

Aww thanks KL smile
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I have a feeling i am going to be reading a lot of your work

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shirlena

8 Years Ago

I certainly hope so and not just for the points...thank you :)
quite abstract and extremely good poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shirlena

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much willweb :).
consciousness riddled......exposing recollections. This ain't collection, but accumulation. It leaves one gasping for breath. How can I hold in that old fart?! Keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Well hi my sweet Shirlena, okay, this diminutive delicacy with the sweet smelling dancer's ankles and the sway that makes a man lip licking and teeth to clamp down on bottom lip has no push-over qualities I can see... but what I can see in imagination is truly pleasing for under all this cloaked language lies a heart full of aspiration to be treated to life in its fullness and she doesn't strike me as one that would wait around for someone to play games or to be stingy with giving this mouth-watering woman the exactness of what she should have laid at her feet... for she is respected... I see that in the way she walks... the sway of her hips and the allure of her fragrance as it permeates in her trail.
I do love the full richness of the way you use the words to create your unique language... It has me needing! xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shirlena

8 Years Ago

You read and interpreted this perfectly...you are getting to be to good at this. Starting to scare m.. read more
Lips with a dialogue, dance with a purpose, walk with an angle and she walks to the table pact of fruition after all said and done. Tight purse strings are the are the conscience of riddled taunting. An excellent write...:).................

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shirlena

8 Years Ago

Well let's just say, I ain' sayin she's a gold digga but she likes a man who isn't stingy lol, howev.. read more
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

My pleasure. Any time...:)...........................
I'm currently fighting off a fever and my reviewing skills are rather warped thanks to my cloudy head, but I had to let you know that this one was promptly added to my favourites and will be revisited when my concentration returns...I am wholly intrigued by this woman and am looking forward to learning more about her...you never fail to churn out astounding poetry my friend...excellent work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shirlena

8 Years Ago

Aww I hope you feel better sweetie. You come back when you feel better and thank you for trying.

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