UNFOLDING SAGA OF PRIDE

How to unfurl this story of pride?

Glory is whacking, how to embed it in my lines...

Here essence of soil brings jiffies of happiness

That tales of chronicle fills heart with pride...

The aegis of father is from Himalayas

The warmth of mother affection is from Ganges 

Sublime beauty of Hindi suffuse on my heart

Crops are singing the tale of progress apart

At every step the colors changes

Tradition and culture fragrance amazes

Rapport among folks sings songs of love

Colors of Holi, lights of Diwali always bring trust...

Architect of history leaves impression on heart

The lesson of values we have learnt from start

Where guest is given god designation

Mahatma, Bheem, Azad, you are proud of nation...

Tricolor incite the spark in our mind

Jan Gan Man, my favorite rhyme..

Fortunate are we, you made us your part...

Bless my people, my nation, my lord

Let our every step is of conviviality for all.....

                                                     

                              

Reviews

[raj24]

Its a beautiful one Anne.. we are proud of our country and our achievements although not so much on our politicians..:).. and Sophy rightly pointed out unity issue.. we are still much into these regional issues and also religious ones.. but I think we will get better with time.. as a country we have made great advancements in these 67 young yrs..so cheers :)

Raj

[anne]

thank you so much Raj....do consider your thoughts and they are very true... :))

[Sophy Freebirds]

Hey Anne.. wish you a Happy 67th Independence day in Advance;).. i take pride in being an Indian.our country is full of diversity.. :) The thing we badly lack is unity. Being the oldest of all civilisations we are still lagging behind.If all indians unite nobody can stop the progress.. ;) Great write babes.. Jai hind!!

~Sophy

[anne]

Wish you same Sophy...Yes the things you pointed out are very true, thanks for sharing these thoughts....Jai Hind...Jai Bharat...

[little thoughts]

beautiful poem. its our independence day too. india has indeed a beautiful culture and so are its people
well written anne !

[anne]

You are from....????...well nice to hear we share same day of pride....thank you so much dear for these beautiful words.... :))