Scars

Scars

 

Sometimes I feel I’m Draining

Sometimes I feel I’m Cloning

The Paranoia left me Insecure

Finding the way I’ve been Sour

 

When they say ‘Love is Life’

I abandoned the Elixir for a Knife

Feel so much like I’m aparted

Despite of facts it’s never like Bonded

 

Wound that never Heal

Guilt that cannot Reveal

Fantasy that never could be True

You be my ‘Bride’ I be your ‘Groom’

 

Rule my world again

Punish me for Certain

I’ve finished my work still on my bed

Love is vanished

Only Scars Left

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lizzie Mitchell]

This is deep and emotional. I like how the last line explains the title.

[Shiveon]

thank u Lizzi... :)

[Riley Justine]

This is well done. Really captures emotions and shows your readers and reviewers some deep emotion that is bundled up inside your soul.

[Shiveon]

Thnks Raven.. 4 Connecting... :)

[Riley Justine]

No problem, I love reading poems ;)

[Frozen Eyes]

Very deep one buddy. Let the scars remind U of the mistakes less and the lessons more. Life is full of surprises, good or bad shouldn't matter. after all every moment has something new in it.
Thank you for sharing, I empathise :)

[Shiveon]

Thnq u Frozen, , :)

[stars are far]

Omg that was so strong and very heartfelt, that touched me so deep. I wish everything will be fine one day . :) well done expressed :)

[Shiveon]

I hope So Stars, bt On this Valentine only Scars r Left... by the way Thanks 4 ur Valuable Review

[stars are far]

Same here.. cheer up life wont wait for us :D