The Death Note

The Death Note

Reaper was upon me, saying "You are done"

Did enough sin, it’s time for reckoning

Stared him for a sec, red eyes full of greed and loath

Looked like he wanted me more than those

I sighed down and recalled all the Tragedy

Asked myself, "Am I ready?"

But my heart refused to go with him

So I asked, "Can I have a limp?"

"What is it? Your times up", He said

I begged hard to spare me some more time

He’d to agree cuz it can’t be done without my will

So he lent me a Note and a Grill

I wanted to write her name one last time

For the sake of love, for the sake of Dying

But Reaper didn’t know what that was all about

A lover’s last letter or a Suicidal crawl

V - The letter is first of her name

A - Don’t know how He came

S - That is me inside her

U - Are my Nectar!

As the last letter was coming out of my ink

Suddenly Reaper said, "Times up! No more sin"

My eyes’ shuttered down with a hope

Will I see her! Or The Death Note?

Reviews

[Eve S.]

Being a lover of The Death Note, and particularly of L, the title hooked me. It is an interesting idea to write about it in such an enegmatic way. It fits the mood of the anime series. The doute with which you ended your piece has a charm. Left me thinking.

[Shiveon]

thanks eve. hope u liked it, yea the piece is inspired from Death Note Anime and its only for Death Note lovers cuz only they can understand, Lol. :)

[Sebastian Falzarano]

I loved Death Note!