Of an empty precious cage

This poem was written and first published as a review of ''A Childhood Lost'' in writers cafe. "A childhood Lost" is written by Amplyyours.

Those dreams, those colors, those faces,

All lost, all wracked in this ''Life'' named maze.

I couldn't trap those days,

In my ''precious'' golden cage.

                                                   - Inspired by a Bangla song of Rabindranath Thakur 

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

NICE!! so much said within just 4 short lines... awesome... very unique in style I love that!! **tips my lyrical wand to you**

[Amplyyours]

Thank you for the review, it is great what my poem inspired you to do.

[Me]

What a beauty of a poem.

[Ms. Gruye]

I enjoy the simplicity you have invoked here. Sometimes the most complex and beautiful sentiments are best captured with the plainest use of imagery. This piece would be a testament to that.

Thanks for posting and viva la