Wings Of Freedom.....

Wings Of Freedom.....

A Poem by ShubhamT
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The poem is all about freedom and priceless things which nature have to show us.

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Wings of Freedom
Wings are to fly; 
 
The limit is  sky,
What I wanna is freedom to fly.
High mountains to see;
 
deep rivers to swim,
Freedom makes me glee,
of a target which I dream.
Wings are to fly; 
 
The limit is sky,
What I wanna is freedom to fly.
We came alone;
We will go alone,
Freedom is to be alone.
Live with me or; 
leave me alone,
The battle is mine and, 
I know a win is also mine.
Wings are to fly; 
 
The limit is sky,
What I wanna is free to fly.
                             -Shubham.T

© 2019 ShubhamT


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ShubhamT
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I liked the energy and the drive in your words.
"Wings are to fly;
The limit is sky,
What I wanna is free to fly."
The above lines. Good to know and try to be. Thank you Shubham for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ShubhamT

8 Months Ago

Bro thank you very much for the review. You won't imagine that how special is it on getting first re.. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.



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Whether a bird or a human,Freedom is what everyone desires.your work is a nice piece somewhere showing your enthusiasm and your urge to seek freedom.
I guess it will be better if you remove that 'a' in the last line of second last paragraph

Posted 6 Months Ago


wow. precise and to the point

Posted 8 Months Ago


ShubhamT

8 Months Ago

Thanks Bro!
Freedom of movement is a precious thing. I am reminded of those who do not have freedom. They don't even have freedom of mind. That's the journey your lines took me on Shubham. I think of the caged bird here as well and what a great metaphor that is.

Chris

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ShubhamT

8 Months Ago

Yes very true nothing like freedom. Thanks for review.
Christine Anne Shaw

8 Months Ago

You are welcome.
Amazing poem which would kindle every one. You have beautifully correlated the presence of wings and desire for freedom. I would like to suggest two corections:
1.Use of the word 'want' would gel more than using 'wanna'.
2. In the last line of second last stanza it is advisable to delete the word 'a'.
Keep writing, keep sharing!


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ShubhamT

8 Months Ago

Hey, thanks Mihika .Thank you very much for suggestion.I will really work upon it.
Keep writi.. read more
So very nicely written, like the poetic style

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ShubhamT

8 Months Ago

Sorry Brandie for late reply but, your review is really
encouraging for me.I would also revi.. read more
Spiritually uplifting, carefree, magical feel about this poem. That really makes you feel the power and passion to believe in anything. And that it's possible. Even to fly free without limits.

Posted 8 Months Ago


ShubhamT

8 Months Ago

Really fly without limits is freedom.Thanks for review.
Wonderful and optimistic poem. I always love poems having a positive note and this is exactly the one. I liked the main lines a lot but I also loved the line -Freedom is to be alone. Very nice work 👍


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ShubhamT

8 Months Ago

Really thanks for your review.I would also reviewing yours.
I liked the energy and the drive in your words.
"Wings are to fly;
The limit is sky,
What I wanna is free to fly."
The above lines. Good to know and try to be. Thank you Shubham for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ShubhamT

8 Months Ago

Bro thank you very much for the review. You won't imagine that how special is it on getting first re.. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.

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ShubhamT

Pune, Haveli, India



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