YOUR THOUGHT AND PAINFUL SUNRISE

YOUR THOUGHT AND PAINFUL SUNRISE

A Poem by Sibt-e-Hussain
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When I Do Nothing, Still I Miss You, and When I Miss You I Can't Do anything.

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Why the Day has risen beneath painful sighs

For no reason, it’s tearing from my eyes

 

I'm longing to once approach you,

Oh' I can’t find you, I can’t reach you


You make me live but it’s not my breath

You’re inside heart, but it’s not my beat


@Especially my thanks to Devon for her assistance.

© 2013 Sibt-e-Hussain


Author's Note

Sibt-e-Hussain
You make me live but it’s not my breath
You’re inside heart, but it’s not my beat

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Nicely expressed.

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I could feel the emotion in this pieces. Nicely writen. You have a way with words.

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Bittersweet yes? You have expressed yourself well ( :

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@ Thrinna Mae, Thanks a lot I'm Honored

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This is really well expressed...Short, simple yet creative enough...
Well done!
:)))

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Added on April 18, 2012
Last Updated on May 29, 2013
Tags: Love and Pain, Painful Thoughts, Painful Sunrise, Passionate Love
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Sibt-e-Hussain
Sibt-e-Hussain

Pakistan



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